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©2006-2009 *catgirlkari
:iconcatgirlkari:

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EDIT: Fixed a typo...
This page was inspired by Naruto Vol. 3, chapter 22.

Poem manga is based on, found here --> [link]
First manga...yada yada... be nice.
Kari out ;3
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Completly redone in Photoshop CS2

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:iconninjamatty:
the moon is very well done =D
:iconcatgirlkari:
You have Naruto (Masashi Kishimoto) to thanks for that!

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The days pass by and change,
without us even realizing how blue the sky really is.
:iconlunarsparks:
Nice page, only one thing I would like to say. I read "...and gems of the moon ..." before "... stars in the sky ..." because it is raised above the second caption rather than below it. I know that it is supposed to be read from right to left but I think you may have to consider whether a caption is positioned above another caption correctly. Even though a person may be reading from right to left, they are still reading from up to down ... so the order threw me off a bit. Hope I'm making sense with what I am trying to say. ^^;

I like the contrast of this page to the others. Because of it's lack of visuals, it has a mystery to it. :D

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:floating: Part Angel ... Part Devil :devilish:

Money takes you around the world, your imagination takes you further!
:iconcatgirlkari:
Oh um... wow... somehow those two boxes got switched I think... thanks for pointing that out! (Goes to fix mistake, PRONTO) XP

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The days pass by and change,
without us even realizing how blue the sky really is.
:iconlunarsparks:
Much better :D

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:floating: Part Angel ... Part Devil :devilish:

Money takes you around the world, your imagination takes you further!

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